Session 2 T4

 WALT vary our sentences

Resources: Modelling book / Thesaurus 

 

Motivation:	Paragraph:
Day 1: The magical umbrella Water began to puddle at her feet.	Cinderella was walking out of her castle when an old lady told her young one the old lady gave an umbrella.Cinderella was confident and said why you give me and it is not raining and I don’t have any money to pay you. The old lady said it was for free so she took it and walked with it then rain came out Cinderella opened the umbrella and she saw something a cloud came out of the umbrella. Cinderella had an idea. She put a candy bar in the umbrella and a giant hand appeared in the sky. Cinderella had the power to see everything in the world but she had to be careful then someone push Cinderella. It was a man. Water began to puddle at her feet.   TO BE CONTINUED…..
Day 2: The haunted house It was then that she heard it… Whispers behind the door!	Cinderella got smoke and entered the potel sea, fell down the sky and she landed on water and when she got out of the water she saw a house and went inside for the night. Then she heard something upstairs and went to see what the noise was. It was a witch that had tried to get people for a position but she was in a dream. She woke up with a shock. There was a rat eating cheese in front of her. She was hungry and wanted to eat. She went outside and saw a basket filled with food she rushed back inside to eat. Then she went downstairs to check if there was anything to stay warm. She saw a door. It was then that she heard it… Whispers behind the door it was a lever she switched the lever down she heard a BOOM!  TO BE CONTINUED…..
Day 3: Underwater city The water was rising. Soon, everything would be underwater.	Cinderella caused an earthquake by switching the lever. It hit the ocean and caused a Tsunami to hit the city Cinderella entered another door sleeping gas started and Cinderella fell asleep someone made a trap to drown cinderella it was like how she was pushed into the umbrella it was the same men that pushed cinderella. Cinderella was swimming but she could not because the Tsunami was very strongThe water was rising. Soon, everything would be underwater. TO BE CONTINUED…………………………………………

Season 1 Writing

 Session 1

WALT vary our sentences

Resources: Modelling book / Thesaurus 

Motivation:	Paragraph:
Day 1: The  Forbidden Tower Time was running out! They only had a matter of minutes.	It was a dark night. I could see a rainbow sky for same reason, so I hit a door and it brought me to a tower that looked haunted but I just  went inside to stay warm but there was no door so I had to stay outside. When I wake up i run away from the tower cuz there was a magpie I waited till the magpie was gone but it turned into a human but not are person it was a witch the witch saw me and made me lock up in a dungeon it said (open the door) then a door a paired from nowhere then the door closed and disappeared so I went to the wall and said (open the door) time was running out the chase has began TO BE  CONTINUED……
Day 2: The Golden Key She had been chasing it all day. Now, the crow had it.	I was walking down the path when a crow took my keys. She had been chasing it all day. Now, the crow had it that’s when I remember that Iput a camera on it to track on my phone i flowed it with my car and it was at a gas station I saw were it was but it was not easy there were  10 crows one of them had a clock in there becks and the others had keys so I gave up it will came for  more shiny then when I turned around my car was gone with my phone the crows toke it to when i look up 60 crows wore lifting my car on the gas station.  TO BE CONTINUED……
Day 3: The Edge of the World She embarked on a journey across the ocean.	I was walking home when I saw a sign that said free so I went to look and there were shoes. I got home with the shoe and washed it but when it got a little water it was clean. I did not know what was going on so I wore it the next day to see how it was. The next day I wore the shoe but it did not fit then a thing appeared. It was a video I watched and the shoe was building  to my size. I wore it and it made water go everywhere when I walk the same way. I was walking to a bridge when  same men came. I knew that he had drags and he pushed me off the bridge but the shoe turned into ice and warm things came out of the shoe. It was warM in my shoes but when  I touched the water it turned into ice and wherever I walked it turned into ice so I was trying to run but it did not work. She embarked on a journey across the ocean. TO BE CONTINUED…....

My Describe what you see

Kea bird

Whio-Blue Duck

My door way writeing

Bird of the year

Fake or Real Media

Evaluating Media

What is Media?

What is Quality Blog Comment

Quality Blog Posts

Volcano Maths

Eruption Quiz

Friday do all volcanoes look the same

Is all volcano look the same

Things about Volcano

Auckland and beyord

What is a Quality Blog Comment?

The Present

Kia Orana! This term my class and I have been writing about a short film called "THE PRESENT." I hope you all like my short story! Please enjoy. Meitaki!

One day it was a very sunny day. A boy was playing with his PS3. He was playing for a long time when his mum came in and put a box and told him to go outside. Please open the box for you. The boy opened the box and there was a cute dog.The boy paused the game so he could open the box but something was wrong. He threw the dog when he just saw that his dog leg was cut and the boy was mad.When the dog was thrown he saw a red ball and tried to get it but he could for a second.When the dog got the ball he headbutted the ball to the boy and the boy kicked it.When the boy kick the ball it went in the box and the dog run to it but he was struggling to go and get it but he still made it then he got stuck in the box but for some reason the dog made it to the boy.The boy pick up the ball and he was doing something and he stand up and went to the front door and shouted to his mum am going outside and started play with the dog.

 

Learning about Composting

The Snow Fight

Kupe and the Giant Wheke

Rua and Te Manu

  

Something happens and the swing is moving. Someone is on it. I think that someone was on it and now they are not. They might have jumped and the swing is still moving and now it will never stop. I guess that he jumped too high and they got hurt and they are small or something. I think there's a ghost on the swig because swings don’t move for a long time. They only take about 10 second before it stops so that means they might be a ghost on the swing. Auto swing is not a thing and how they might make it in the future sounds cool.  

My Matariki

 

This is my Certificate 

The Baboon and the Man

My Free Stuff

Its only Photos and Gifs of Pokemon

Awarua Taniwha of Porirua

Awarua Taniwha of Porirua

Once upon a time there were two yogurt containers that were sister and brother. They were both in cabinet and then they were separated from each other into lunch boxes and that was the end of fresh and smooth or is it no it is no finish Fresh was starting to cry that they were separated for each other that when she made it to the sea and she starts to scream and that she was lost but at the end she thanly she a smooth were together and we were led by mrs green for the end so they both came together the class’s that went on stage were 25,18,Tuatahi,8,21,12,6,4,19,11,20,24,16,17,22,7,5,14,23 that in total is 18 class’s. 

Awarua the Taniwha of Porirua

Basket Of Fire

Manaakitanga - Positive quote

Grandfather and Granddaughter

 The grandfather is a great person for his granddaughter. The grandfather is very poor that they are very hungry. He can’t eat because he has no money to buy food for them to.The grandfather is a very nice man and his job is a cameraman. His granddaughter is sweet and caring and they both lived in Samoa.

The lion was a lazy parker and slept all day on his rock.He had a mighty strong roar. He was always shouting a lot and being a show off. He has green light eyes with red hair and his whole entire body is cat fur.His teeth are sharper than a knite.

The lion was a lazy parker and slept all day on his rock.He had a mighty strong roar. He was always shouting a lot and being a show off. He has green light eyes with red hair and his whole entire body is cat fur.His teeth are sharper than a knite.

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The mouse was so little that he is so small that he gets stepped on everytime.One day when he was about to sleep he had an Idea. His Idea was that he needs a roar.The next day he went to talk to the lion . How do you roar? He climbed the rock and when he made it he had nose to nose with the lion. The lion was asleep and the mouse squeaked and the lion jumped and burst into tears.That it is ok that you are big but you can stop being a show off to other people. 

My Word Art

Culture Unity Day 2021

Happy Culture Unity Day to all family and friends I hope you have a fun  Culture Unity Day with your kids have fun. The food at school is good I wish your family can eat with us and cousins if you have one😭.  BLOG YA LATER

My Name in Sign Lanaguge

This week is New Zealand Sign Language Week. I have  been learning to Sign my name in finger  Language. 

What wound you do if you had to do Sign Language.

My Attributing Images

My 24 Hour Footprint-Ako

Oakley Creek Writing Prompts

Richard and Tupou

 

Room 23 went to GARDEN TO TABLE. When they arrived at the garden to table meeting place, we had to listen to Richard for instructions. Richard was telling everyone in the group to get into 3 groups to do something in the garden. 

Tupou is very happy with the job that he was doing. The potatoes are in the bucket with the tomatoes. Some of the tomatoes look rotten so they had to throw them away. The potatoes were dirty but that doesn't matter if the potatoes were dirty. Thank you for the Huarakau team for preparing a yummy meal for us.

the right place at the right time online

Know your Keyboard

Toku Pepeha

The Tunnel Writing 2

 I would be stocked by the shark and try to stay still when the shark is going in a circle. The man is being brave and trying to scare the shark away. The shark is not in to the the stick so he can bite the stick and swim away.

The Tunnel Writing 1

 

I notice that there are two people standing on a rock. I wonder if I touch the water and if something is in there I would stand next to the rock still and I will hear too many splash’s and heavy splash’s from the waterfall that may hurt me. I see people with camp clothes and seeing what they are doing to them. I think that if there is infestation for their work or something from the plants is dead or is it ok.If one of the campers is happy  holding a paper with something written on it.

Kawa of Care - Chromebook Post #2

Kawa of Care - Chromebook poster #1

My Treaty of Waitangi Writing 1

 

I notice that in their cultures there are English groups and Maori groups. The Maori groups are seated in the ground. One of the Maori man is standing to do signing of the Treaty  and the English  people are standing too and watching the Maori man signing the Treaty. The English people have guards there with red guard clothes that means that the guards are there to make sure everything is done in a peaceful way.

My Kawa of Care slides

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