Season 1 Writing

 Session 1

WALT vary our sentences

Resources: Modelling book / Thesaurus 

Motivation:	Paragraph:
Day 1: The  Forbidden Tower Time was running out! They only had a matter of minutes.	It was a dark night. I could see a rainbow sky for same reason, so I hit a door and it brought me to a tower that looked haunted but I just  went inside to stay warm but there was no door so I had to stay outside. When I wake up i run away from the tower cuz there was a magpie I waited till the magpie was gone but it turned into a human but not are person it was a witch the witch saw me and made me lock up in a dungeon it said (open the door) then a door a paired from nowhere then the door closed and disappeared so I went to the wall and said (open the door) time was running out the chase has began TO BE  CONTINUED……
Day 2: The Golden Key She had been chasing it all day. Now, the crow had it.	I was walking down the path when a crow took my keys. She had been chasing it all day. Now, the crow had it that’s when I remember that Iput a camera on it to track on my phone i flowed it with my car and it was at a gas station I saw were it was but it was not easy there were  10 crows one of them had a clock in there becks and the others had keys so I gave up it will came for  more shiny then when I turned around my car was gone with my phone the crows toke it to when i look up 60 crows wore lifting my car on the gas station.  TO BE CONTINUED……
Day 3: The Edge of the World She embarked on a journey across the ocean.	I was walking home when I saw a sign that said free so I went to look and there were shoes. I got home with the shoe and washed it but when it got a little water it was clean. I did not know what was going on so I wore it the next day to see how it was. The next day I wore the shoe but it did not fit then a thing appeared. It was a video I watched and the shoe was building  to my size. I wore it and it made water go everywhere when I walk the same way. I was walking to a bridge when  same men came. I knew that he had drags and he pushed me off the bridge but the shoe turned into ice and warm things came out of the shoe. It was warM in my shoes but when  I touched the water it turned into ice and wherever I walked it turned into ice so I was trying to run but it did not work. She embarked on a journey across the ocean. TO BE CONTINUED…....